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The Fixed Annie Dillard Summary

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Annie Dillard, an experienced nature writer and published author, suggests in her excerpt from “The Fixed” that once a mistake is made, a life can be changed forever. She begins with introducing a cocoon that was found by the narrator’s friend, Judy, when she was a child. Describing what kind of moth will emerge from the bundle gives the reader a certain set of expectations of the outcome, using vivid imagery and diction reminiscent of her childhood innocence to plant these anticipations into the readers mind – the innocence of the narrator making the story appear to begin with a bright and guiltless point of view. Then, she displays the innocent yet violent actions of children of her childhood class, using diction with harmful overtones to …show more content…

It “jerk[s] violently,” “squirm[ing]” in the tight holds of the children as they unknowingly hurt the creature (Dillard). The author subtly lets the reader know that what is happening with words with like “muffling,” words with violent, crime-like connotations (Dillard). This causes a slight shift in the tone of the passage, an indirect notification that the outcome is not favorable as the tone becomes one of apprehension. This shift causes the reader to question the original belief about the moth, the expectation that the moth will be a beautiful, colorful …show more content…

The children leave to go outside and play, and the narrator is walking along the driveway. She stumbles across the moth, recognizing the “hideous crumpled wings” (Dillard). Someone must have released the creature, given it its freedom by releasing it back into the world. It is then, as she watches the moth “crawling down the driveway” that the narrator has the realization what has happened to moth. She realizes that the moth will be forced to crawl “forever” (Dillard). The last word of the excerpt being “forever,” a powerful choice in diction, gives the described end an eternal feel. It is a realization that feels like a splash of cold water to the face with the abruptness in which it is presented. The small mistake of bringing a cocoon into the classroom has changed the natural course of one being’s life. This is the finality of the situation, and it is emphasized by the pitying tone of the last paragraph. The author leaves the end with a tone of pity and cold, harsh reality – clearly depicting the tragic events that occurred without a second thought from the

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