Alexxis Euan
Ms. Martin
AP Literature
September 14, 2017 Neighbors Point of View Essay
Through Raymond Carver’s minimalist styled writing, comes “Neighbors,” a story about a seemingly ordinary couple who live dreary and plain lives. In the first few paragraphs we have a detailed description of the type of people, the relationship, and occupations Bill and Arlene Miller have. Later on, the story begins to spark a more dark and mysterious conflict by unraveling the Miller’s strange obsessions. Carver uses third person objective point of view to add onto his technique of simplistic writing & to create a more intense mystery.
In the beginning of Neighbors, the reader is introduced to Bill and Arlene Miller. Carver describes their lives and how miserable they seem to be. This is until their neighbors, the Stones, go away for a vacation and their apartment is left for Bill and Arlene to watch. Once they leave, the strangeness begins to occur. Bill and Arlene seem to find comfort in going to the Stones’ apartment where we notice their odd actions. The Millers seem to find any excuse to go to the Stones apartment, making their plain lives a bit more exciting and sparking a connection between the two. Even their sex lives are described to be more intense. At this point, Bill and Arlene do pointlessly bizarre things that are completely unjustified. The short story goes from the characters rummaging through the medicine cabinet to Bill standing in Ms. Stones underwear and brassiere with no reasoning or thoughts. As well as when Arlene goes to their apartment for an extended amount of time she comes back with only an explanation of “It’s funny... going into someone’s place like that.” Because the story is told in third person objective, we don’t have any explanation of Bill and Arlene’s confusing and creepy actions.
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Do you believe is still happening in America? I think it is because America has just been hiding it. Jermaine Cole whom is known by his rap name as J. Cole agrees that racism is still alive. J. Cole is known as one of the most dominant African American in the hip hop industry. J. Cole uses his music to tell true life story that goes in this world. He also uses his knowledge to speak to his fans about the black community and how we as blacks get treated about police and other races. When Cole make music that relate to the black community and raps about goes on in the black community every day. One of the biggest ways Cole related to his black fans base is by creating his song “Neighbors” debuted off his album “4 Your Eyes Only”(2016). Cole is an influential rapper who is half black and half white, relates to his black fan base and shows the trauma that black men face daily. It is sad to say but in a white man’s society, if a black man takes one step forward society pushes him five steps back. Society is messed up, we need to stop being racist and uplift each other. This song explains J. Cole’s point of view of the world in a different perspective. Those perspectives were broken up into three point of view.
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The short story is written in a colloquial tone and reads similarly to an unfocused train of thought, conveying simplicity and realism within the piece. The narrator frequently drifts from a complete statement to an aside throughout the narrative; for example, while discussing the poem his wife composed about her friend Robert he offhandedly recalls, “...I didn’t think much of the poem. Of course, I didn’t tell her that. Maybe I just don’t understand poetry,” (Carver 356). This passage, and others similar to it, cause the flow of the plot to meander, rather than adhere to a strict linear format. Additionally, while the abrupt and nonchalant remarks hold little substance to the narrator, they give the reader a window to the substantial disconnect between the narrator and his peers.
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In Raymond Carver’s short story “Viewfinder”, Carver creates a juxtaposition between his two main characters; a handicapped photographer and a homeowner. At first, the juxtaposition of these two characters seems irrational, but as the story progresses the two character’s similarities are revealed as the theme of loss becomes evident.
The story is narrated in a third person point of view. The reader sees things through Charlie’s eyes, witch means all his thoughts and observations are being narrated. The conflict in the story is that Charlie wants his daughter back. It is not going to be easy and there are a lot of obstacles from
The short story neighbors, uses the neighbors comments, behavior and neglect to convey their true intentions of envy greed and responsibility to portray a life of unfulfillment and a need for happiness.
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Carver describes this scene with an emotional detachment, concentrating more on what is happening, rather than why. In her essay about understanding Carver's revisions, Hashimoto says that minimalistic writing describes the events as they transpire, allowing the reader to draw his own conclusions. It is most likely that this is Carver's goal.