Seven Types of Paragraph Development by Gerald Grow, PhD Division of Journalism Florida A&M University http://www.longleaf.net/ggrow/modes.html In their pursuit of clear, concise writing, journalism students sometimes develop the habit of writing everything in short, choppy paragraphs that are unrelated to one another. Reviewing any good high school writing handbook will remind you that considerable thought has been given to how longer paragraphs can be developed into well focused presentations of single units of thought. What follows is an (imaginary) article invented to illustrate many of the "modes of discourse"--the traditional methods by which writing is developed. In succession, the following paragraphs are narration, …show more content…
After appearing intermittently in scattered sinkholes, the river rises three miles downstream in a big boil, then continues on to meet the Suwannee and the sea. Nearby, stands of cypress mirror themselves in the still waters, walls of dense river swamp rise before you, sudden sinkholes open in the woodlands-rich with cool ferns and mosses. Farther from the river, expanses of longleaf pinelands stretch across rolling hills. In the midst of this lovely setting, you find 65 campsites, 18 rustic cabins, and a pavilion for group meetings. A diving platform marks a good place to swim in the soft, cool waters of the Santa Fe, and canoeing up this dark river is like traveling backwards in time in the direction of original Florida. Comments on description: 1. Description is not what you saw, but what readers need to see in order to imagine the scene, person, object, etc. 2. Description requires you to record a series of detailed observations. Be especially careful to make real observations. The success of a description lies in the difference between what a reader can imagine and what you actually saw and recorded; from that gap arises a spark of engagement. 3. Use sensory language. Go light on adjectives and adverbs. Look for ways to describe action. Pay special attention to the sound and rhythm of words; use these when you can. 4. Think that your language is not so
describe the characters, setting, and conflict using meaningful sensory descriptions and details that enable the reader to visualize the experiences in your narrative.
Whenever you use words to depict or re-create a scene, an object, a person, or a feeling, you use description.
On February 22, 2016 author John Warner published an article on Just Visiting entitled “Kill the 5-Paragraph Essay.” Warner creatively talks about how rudimentary of a structure this type of essay holds. Writers are locked inside a cage of regulations and guidelines making them unable to write the essay as they please, but rather having to piece together regulated sentences and paragraphs because that’s what they have been told would score high on certain test questions. The article targets people of all kinds, but is more directed towards early college aged students. The purpose behind this article is to get them to expand their horizon, disregard all the regulations they have been previously taught and start to write in a much more open-minded sense.
To create a piece of fabric, small textile fibers are crisscrossed, stitched, and sewn together. If unraveled, the individual fibers remain, but as a whole, they function collectively to make a larger and more significant piece. This is known as weaving, and it is argued by some literary researchers that this process of weaving can be figuratively applied to procedures of writing by way of intertextuality―the composition theory that claims all texts refer to other texts. From this assertion, James E. Porter’s “Intertextuality and the Discourse Community,” argues originality is nearly impossible to achieve, as no thought originates without influence from other sources; however, after examining the essays “All Writing is Autobiography” by Donald
Ultimately, whatever you can perceive or experience can be the focus of your descriptive writing.
1. CHARACTER DESCRIPTION & GROWTH: Describe the main character. How does he/ she change or develop internally (on the inside) through the story? Explain what he/ she is like at the beginning of the novel, the middle, and then how he/she finally changed by the end. Give specific text evidence from the story to support your ideas.
1. Exposition: List five key details that provide background to the characters and the plot up to this point. Explain why each detail is so important to the story.
Anyway, when we turned onto Broadway Street, we knew that we would be arriving in a matter of minutes and our anticipation rose with every pothole and row of corn stalks we passed. After stopping for the occasional family of deer on the “L” shaped road, we would eventually arrive at the third camper on the left. It might just be a campsite with a silver twinky for a camper to most people, but for me, this place is the heaven that made me, me. With all its amenities, I couldn't think of a way to make this place any better. The campsite consisted of a camper against the woods on the left, a yard with a steep drop off to the river on the right, and the essential outhouse and fireplace. The entrance to the knee deep river was at the next campsite with two Weeping Willow bushes signaling where to enter. When anyone entered, there was initial shock of chill due to the water but it was easy to adapt to. There was a log perpendicular to the shore that kept the water depth about ankle
Without the use of description an essay, poem or story would be considered as uninteresting and boring. The use of expressive language is a descriptive element used in this essay. The language applied allows the reader to see exactly what the writer is saying. The writer deliberately chose words that paint a picture and are vividly expressive. “Description should aim for accuracy and fairness and avoid
I am bad with transitions, describing the thing I am talking about, and using exceptional words without having to fall back to a thesaurus. This lack of proper transitions is visible is almost all of my papers. For instance, in all of my papers that require some form of order I use the generic, first, then/next, and finally. This is can be easily seen in all of the narratives especially “AI Recolors New Mexico State Flag” which due to its nature requires a lot of transitions. Next, we have my descriptions. I am very bad at proper describing imagery. This is once again shown in all of my narratives, but a key example is from “The Flip”. In The Flip very little descriptions are used except when necessary for that it is most of the time just a word like big or
It was early afternoon when two rental limo’s pulled up in front of the BellRose Hotel, a sprawling, castle-like building of local stone. The driver of the first limo got out, and opened the door for his passengers. The first to get out was a svelte 29-year-old woman with long black hair, hazel eyes, and light Asian skin. She wore black slacks, a purple sweater, black boots, and a black leather coat with her hair styled in an artistically intricate braid. She was followed by a plump but healthy 32-year-old brunette with olive skin, and green eyes. How white count was the pool close around her Red shirt that was paired with jeans and sneakers. The last to exit the car was a lithe 29-year-old with dark blonde hair, dark blue-green eyes, and
B. The depicts describe, detail, relates, presents, set forth, set out, outline, delineate, represent, portray, and characterize a time and struggle. II. What are the geographical chronological units of the book?
Description is one of the most important author's craft. It helps paint a picture for the reader. It also adds depth to the story. It makes you feel like you are there with
While discussing seventeenth and eighteenth century writing styles, the authors discuss how writing is related to “oral delivery” and how this “oral
In this part of the essay, there will be discussion on how the commonly used approach of genre is utilize for which purpose of discourse. They are, typography, oral, and iconography approach. All of these approaches of genre usage will be discussed in detail in this section of the essay.