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Exemplary Post 24 Points

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932086 Jimenez Hi Linda,

Exemplary Original Post 24 points: This is a wonderful post. Not only did you address all the discussion prompt questions but the Original Post was well organized and had rich detail. I especially liked "Its known that many pharaohs and high ranking officials would sometime have their servants depicted in some form of image or sculpture so that when they went to the afterlife they would able to utilize their skills to help them in their second life". This post shows that you understand the material and can synthesize the information well. I will caution against something like "the Seated Scribe was royal" as this might be a bit of a stretch. He would most certainly be part of the government working under the king or visar of Egypt, but be a scribe would not be a typical job for a royal. There could be many reasons he was shown in this position. Also, given that there is a lot more information to confirm he was indeed a script and, therefore, an important part of the government over being a royal. Also, I would like to see more of the post in your words instead of quotes, since I want to see how you would state something and your thoughts.

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You have some good points and ideas. The post really wants you to explore similarities in the artworks. Where the artwork is today does not really tell us anything about the values and beliefs of those cultures. Also, you were to compare 2 different cultures. In one of you posts, you compare Egypt to Egypt. In future posts, I will be looking for you all to answer the questions more directly. It is also better to compare known facts instead of possibilities. So comparing the possibility that the seated scribe was a royal is not a good comparison point because there is little to no evidence to make the

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