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Buckle Language Analysis

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The recent proposal for a common national curriculum across all Australian States and territories has sparked large debate across the education board. This has left many Australians questioning the future direction of education in Australia. Stephen Buckle, principal at Narrenwood Secondary College, an Anonymous writer and a cartoon by Jobs provide strong opposing views on the suggested common curriculum. Buckle’s “Why should schooling change at every State border?”, reasonably contends that because all Australians are one, an individuals education should not be determined by where they live. She calls on the “predictable” choices made by State Education Ministers to be replaced by a common curriculum consistent across …show more content…

Buckle uses the “Australian Council of Education Research” to provide evidence from a new report that shows that “many of our school syllabuses” lack “consistency” across the country. Buckle criticises the standards of education set by individual State Governments which advocates that “what students learn is determined by where they live”. The writer appeals to a sense of patriotism that “Australians are one people” and therefore should all be treated equally under the same standards, regardless of where they live. Drawing on the statistics that “less than half the topics taught in Australian History are common across the country” heightens the sense of unfairness because of the discrepancy between differing syllabuses across each state. In contrast, the anonymous writer highlights the importance of nurturing of the varying individual needs of students as “diversity provides choice”. The author puts emphasis on the juxtaposition of the needs of rural students compared to urban students, as their “lives are not the same” and therefore their education should not be either. The writer refers to the relevance of the education materiel used according to environment and opportunities relevant to the students such as listing “wool-classing, land management, and stock handling” for rural schools and “urban studies and freeway pollution” for urban …show more content…

They reasonably acknowledge the valid concerns of “dropping achievement rates and lower school retention figures”, but disagrees with the education of Australia being “controlled by a single authority”. This establishes the author as fair and reliable as they address the real issue at hand. The author positions the readers to view control by the “Commonwealth Department of Education over what is studied by Australia’s 3.3 million students” as a suppressive tyranny over what our children learn. The author further puts emphasis on the restrictions of a national curriculum, scathingly stating that it “impos[es] mindless conformity by ignoring the differing needs of different communities”, stripping children of their freedoms. This evokes similar imagery to what is presented Job’s cartoon. The image depicts young children lined up entering a caged building, reminiscent of a jail labelled ‘Australian National Curriculum”, with an Australian flag hanging limply above. The children enter the building, coaxed by reaching hands on rollers similar to that of a generic factory, and are stripped of their books which are released from the building from drains, along with their individuality. They exit the building in a uniform pack as if all identical products of the Australian curriculum ravaged of individuality. The flopped flag above could suggest the

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